Manuscript Critiques

Whether you’re writing for adults or children, pitch your manuscript directly to industry professionals actively seeking new voices.

Twice A Year
Virtual 1-on-1

About Pitch Perfect

Pitch Perfect gives aspiring authors the opportunity to receive professional feedback on their manuscript and query letter from a literary agent or editor.

With dedicated submission periods for both adult and children’s literature, writers with a completed, unpublished manuscript can apply to have a sample of their manuscript and query letter reviewed. Participants receive valuable industry insight to help strengthen their work and prepare for the publishing journey ahead.

How It Works

While Pitch Perfect applications are reviewed twice a year, the process remains the same.

"In 2021, the FOLD Pitch Perfect contest was the first place where The Full Picture was truly seen. That moment—thanks in large part to Léonicka Valcius, someone I’m still connected to and who has offered invaluable advice over the years—was pivotal in my journey to bringing the book to life."

1

Application

Submit a query letter, a synopsis, and the first 20 pages of your completed manuscript. Review the submission criteria clearly in relation to your genre and target audience.

2

Selection & Matching

Successful applicants will be matched with an agent or editor with relevant experience related to your genre.

3

One-On-One Meeting

Once matched, your agent or editor will carefully review your submission materials, then meet with you virtually to provide individualized feedback on your manuscript.

Pitch Perfect: Kids Literature

Our Pitch Perfect: Kid Lit Edition focuses on children’s literature with agents and editors who specialize in working on picture books, chapter books, and young adult literature, whether fiction or non-fiction.

Eligible Genres

  • Contemporary Fiction
  • Fantasy
  • Historical Fiction
  • Horror
  • Mystery
  • Non-Fiction
  • Romance
  • Science Fiction
  • Thriller

All submissions must fall into one of picture book, middle grade, young adult, or graphic novel formats.

Requirements

  • Polished query letter and synopsis
  • First 20 pages of completed manuscript
  • Be open to feedback and revision

Submission Details

Submission Deadline

August 31, 2026

Cost

$39, payable when application has been approved

How to Apply

Please be ready to upload your query letter, synopsis, and the first 20 pages of your completed manuscript.

SUBMIT YOUR MANUSCRIPT

If you have questions that have not been addressed above, please contact writers@thefoldcanada.org. Please use “PITCH PERFECT” in the subject line.

Success Stories

In 2021, the FOLD Pitch Perfect contest was the first place where The Full Picture was truly seen. That moment—thanks in large part to Léonicka Valcius, someone I’m still connected to and who has offered invaluable advice over the years—was pivotal in my journey to bringing the book to life.
Jessical Carmichael
Jessical Carmichael Author of The Full Picture
I participated in the Pitch Perfect program, where the editor I met with taught me about the "dark night of the soul" moment in romance, and gave me advice that's shaped my writing ever since: "Raise the stakes. Break your reader's heart."
Jaclyn Q. Martinez
Jaclyn Q. Martinez Author of Lady Kitlat Meets Her Match

FAQ

Frequently Asked Questions
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  • Who is eligible to submit to Pitch Perfect?

    Pitch Perfect is open to any aspiring author who has a completed manuscript that has not been previously published. Priority will be given to applicants who have not yet published any works (either traditionally or independently) and reside in Canada.

  • I'm already a published author (either through a traditional publishing house or through self-publishing). Can I still submit to Pitch Perfect?

    Yes. So long as the manuscript you are submitting has never been published in any way, it can be submitted to the Pitch Perfect program. Please note that preference will be given to applicants who are not yet published.

  • What genres of writing can I submit?

    Please refer to the list of eligible genres listed under the Pitch Perfect programs above.

  • My manuscript was previously self-published. Can I still submit it?

    No. The Pitch Perfect program will only accept manuscripts that have never been published.

  • Will my assigned agent/editor review the whole manuscript?

    No. Agents and editors will only review and provide detailed feedback on the first twenty pages of the manuscript.

  • Why do I need to have a completed manuscript?

    The goal of Pitch Perfect is to give aspiring authors the chance to discuss the work they submitted as it relates to the entire manuscript. In the one-on-one meetings, you will be asked questions about where the story goes and how the characters evolve. Without a finished manuscript, it is difficult to answer clearly, which in turn makes it difficult for the agent/editor to provide useful feedback.

  • Does the manuscript have to be polished?

    The pages you submit should be polished, but the remainder of the manuscript does not need to be. However, the Pitch Perfect program is most effective if your manuscript is as close to ready for publication as you can manage on your own.

  • Do I have to submit a synopsis?

    Yes. Generally, synopses are an essential part of pitching manuscripts to agents/editors. They allow agents/editors to quickly review the entire arc of the story, including how it ends.

  • What should I include in my synopsis?

    Everything! Seriously. A synopsis should include all major plot points, as well as minor ones that you think are important. It should also include the ending–spoilers required! Author Jane Friedman has some advice on how to write a good synopsis.

  • Do I have to submit a query letter?

    Yes. Generally, query letters are an essential part of pitching manuscripts to agents/editors. For the Pitch Perfect program, the query letter will help us match you with an agent/editor best suited to review your work.

  • What should I include in a query letter?

    We were going to explain all of this in our own words, but that’s a lot of work. Instead, check out this guide to query letters by author Jane Friedman. Query letters can take different forms and agents/editors/publishers often require differing information in the letters they receive. Use Jane Friedman’s article as a starting point and customize it based on your own manuscript and circumstances. In Pitch Perfect, your assigned agent/editor may also give you feedback on how to improve your query letter.

  • What's the difference between an agent or an editor?

    An agent is an author’s representative when submitting manuscripts to publishers. Most traditional publishers do not accept submissions from unagented authors. Agents agree to represent authors when they believe they can successfully sell the manuscript to a publisher.

    An editor works at a publishing house. If they are an acquiring editor, they are responsible for reviewing and accepting manuscripts for publication. There are also other types of editors who specialize in various aspects of writing craft.

    Both agents and editors have extensive experience in reviewing manuscripts and query letters and offering advice on how to improve both.

  • Can I choose who reviews my manuscript?

    In the application, you will have the opportunity to indicate whether you prefer an agent or an editor. We work hard to match each applicant with an agent/editor who is best-suited to their manuscript. However, we cannot guarantee the type of reviewer you are assigned.

  • Do I have to come to Brampton to be a part of Pitch Perfect?

    No. All of the Pitch Perfect sessions will be virtual and will take place over Skype, Zoom, or telephone–whatever works best for you and your assigned agent/editor.

  • What can I expect from the one-on-one meeting?

    You can expect questions about the plot of your story and how the characters evolve. You may also expect questions about how you envision the work will be published, as well as your publishing goals in general. These questions will inform the feedback you receive, which may include what works well in your manuscript and query letter and what needs improvement. You may also ask the agent/editor specific questions about your manuscript. The purpose of the one-on-one meeting is to give you advice and direction for improving your manuscript and motivating you on your publishing journey.

  • Is there a fee to participate in Pitch Perfect?

    Yes. There is a fee to participate ($49 for Pitch Perfect, $39 for Pitch Perfect: Kid Lit Edition), which will be payable only after your application has been accepted. This fee goes toward compensating the agents and editors who are reviewing manuscripts, as this work is outside of their regular job responsibilities. The fee also helps cover the cost of organizing and facilitating the Pitch Perfect program.

    If cost is a prohibitive factor, please indicate so in your application. We understand that writers from marginalized communities may face financial hardships, and we will try our best to accommodate.

  • How will I know if I'm selected?

    You will be notified of the status of your application a few weeks after the submission deadline.

    If you are accepted, you will be sent a link for payment. You will also be given an opportunity to submit updated pages.